Revisi Tanpa Baper: Memberi & Menerima Feedback
Menyampaikan saran dan menerima kritik dengan kalimat sopan; memakai should, could, dan kalimat pengandaian if.
Feedback adalah hadiah — kalau dikemas dengan benar
Revisi bagian wajar dari pekerjaan kreatif. Bahasa Inggris punya banyak cara menyampaikan kritik tanpa menyakiti dan menerima kritik tanpa defensif.
Memberi saran
| Pola | Contoh |
|---|---|
| I think you should + kata kerja | I think you should use a bigger font. |
| Why don't you + kata kerja? | Why don't you try a darker color? |
| It might be better to + kata kerja | It might be better to shorten the title. |
| How about + kata kerja-ing? | How about adding an icon? |
Rumus "sandwich" untuk kritik
1. Pujian : I really like the color palette.
2. Saran : However, I think the text is a bit small.
3. Dukungan : Overall, it looks great — just a few small changes.Kalimat pengandaian (conditional) yang berguna
Pola If + present simple, will + kata kerja untuk kemungkinan nyata:
If you send the feedback today, I will finish the changes by Friday.
If we add more pages, the price will increase.Menerima feedback
| Tujuan | Kalimat |
|---|---|
| Terima kasih | Thank you for your feedback. I really appreciate it. |
| Memahami | Could you give me an example of what you mean? |
| Menyanggupi | Sure, I'll make those changes today. |
| Menolak halus | I understand, but I think the original works better because… |
| Batas revisi | That would be outside the current scope, but I'm happy to quote it separately. |
Meminta feedback
- I'd love to hear your thoughts on this draft.
- Please let me know if you would like any changes.
- Is there anything you'd like me to change?